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Wednesday, February 27, 2008

Bad on Paper -- Writing Good Villains, by Esri Rose

I can’t count the number of times I’ve been reading a book, enjoying it reasonably well, when all of a sudden the villain enters and the story takes off with a jet-engine roar. Villains give the protagonist a clear obstacle and the readers something to root against, whether it’s a murderous loon or the corporate soul-grinding of Bill Lumbergh in Office Space. (“Riiiiight…”)

Of course, one of the scariest villains is the implacable psychopath. We don’t know what drives him. We can’t hope to reason with him or predict his behavior. But I think that for the seriously unbalanced villain to work well, he has to be the main focus of the book; always behind the door or on the other side of the page. I’m going to focus on the non-horror-genre villains in plots that don’t involve power tools.

An interesting villain avoids the following: clichéd dialogue, no clear motivation for his/her actions, and a character so unrelievedly black, it’s the shade of cartoonist’s ink. A villain can be funny, sympathetic, even sexy. So what makes him bad? The answer is absolute selfishness. A true villain does not put anyone before his own desires -- not his mother, or the fluffy dog, or the curly-haired child. You can reason, you can plead, but a villain acts solely in his own interest. The worst villains know they should take others into account, but (sigh), it’s just not handy. The rest of us depend on the fact that most folks have altruistic tendencies – it’s an evolutionary benefit for a social species. Take that trait away and the villain is as alien as something with tentacles and six eyes.

What has cut the villain loose from the rest of humanity? It should be something the reader can comprehend, maybe even relate to. Almost as scary as meeting a villain is wondering if we could become one. Lack of love during childhood, abuse, fanatical beliefs, brainwashing, and willful ignorance are all great fodder. I find the latter particularly terrifying. If you could just explain things, you might be able to stop the bad thing from happening... Bang, you’re dead. Either the villain knew his ignorance served his purposes, or your explanation was going to cut into his favorite show.

Your villain’s motivation and goal are as important as those of your protagonists. I have to confess that I don’t find revenge a powerful motivation, in and of itself. “You messed with my father, so now I’ll mess with you.” Meh…it’s too abstract. It’s not easy to kick over the traces and be bad; you run a lot of risks. Now, if the revenge is an excuse for concrete benefits – the will is changed to enrich the villain, the dead hero’s wife can now be had – then I’m on board. Only a real slimeball justifies selfish behavior by saying the victims deserved what they got. That’s what you’re shooting for – slime. And remember, a determined villain is a scary thing. Don’t make his badness a kind of hobby. Your villain should risk terrible retribution. If the stakes aren’t serious, your reader won’t take him seriously.

Once you’ve developed the motivation of your villain, it’s time to jerk your reader around a little. We fear people who are absolutely selfish. We also fear not being able to tell who those people are. Make your protagonist question her judgment. “Is he as bad as people say? I find him kind of charming.” When the mask slips, the truth will be that much worse. It’s the creepy feeling you get while watching the neighbor scratch his head and say, “He seemed like such a nice guy.” The killer’s mom tearfully insisting, “My son would never do that.” This is also the reason traitors are so loathsome. They once believed what we believed – validated our life choices. Now they’re willing to betray us for something we can’t even comprehend. And we were fooled? Traitors make your protagonists powerfully angry – at themselves.

Finally, dialogue is key to keeping your villains real. Effective villains believe they are the good guys, and they do their best to come across that way -- otherwise, they’d have trouble doing what they do and not getting caught. If they can woo people to their point of view by sowing doubt or getting sympathy, they will. Here are three dialogue snippets from Fellseth, my villain in Bound to Love Her.

1: “Elves don’t just wither up like the Wicked Witch of the East, you know. When your people broke ground for luxury homes on my land, I knew it was going to be a long, drawn-out death.”

2: The irony is, all the elves in existence could survive just fine off dark energy. It’s going to happen anyway. Humans can’t be denied. You could think of dark elves as a kind of evolutionary offshoot. In the end, we’ll be the only ones left.”

Sounds reasonable, even persuasive -- right up until he shows his true colors.

3: “One more outburst like that, and I’ll shoot her ear off as a friendly warning.”

One last word about villains. If you make them both selfish and sympathetic, the reader will feel conflicted about their necessary destruction. Your narrative tension will shoot through the roof, and everyone wins – except the bad guy.

Who are some of your favorite villains, either to read/view, or to write?

Esri Rose’s upcoming elven romance, Bound to Love Her, will be available May 8th.

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At 11:44 AM, Blogger Theresa Ragan said...

This is great. I don't write villains into my books very often, but I do like reading and watching villains in movies. I find Hannibal Lechter a very interesting villain as he tried to get into Clarice's mind...

And that bad woman in that movie wtih Michael Douglas where she is obsessed with him after having an affair and comes after him and his family. That's scary.

I remember feeling sorry for the Sandman in the last spiderman movie. Hmmm. I'm trying to think of less violent villains who I enjoyed. Will have to come back if I think of one or two.

Your villain, Fellseth, sounds absolutely NASTY! I love that clever dialogue!

At 3:16 PM, Blogger Gillian Layne said...

My favorite movie villain is Alan Rickman in Robin Hood. His sheriff of Nottingham was brilliant. Actually, the man who plays the sheriff on the BBC-A tv version is really good, too. Love a villain with a sense of humor.

I've tried to write a villain in an unfinished manuscript I'll eventually work my way back to. It's a huge challenge! Your post really hit the highlights, and I know it will help me go back and figure out why she feels "flatter" than the other characters.

At 3:23 PM, Blogger Esri Rose said...

I LOVED Alan in that movie! Actually, I thought he was the only reason to see it. (rolls eyes in ecstasy) Oo-er, Alan Rickman.

At 5:21 PM, Blogger Diane Gaston said...

There's a great danger in making villains one-dimensional characters and I think I've certainly succumbed to this temptation. So I consciously try to make my villains more complicated.

I like your concepts here, Esri. They are very helpful.

At 10:14 PM, Blogger Delle Jacobs said...

Alan Rickman is the supreme villain! Remember Quigley Down Under? Almost as good as the Sheriff in Robin Hood. "Cut his heart out with a spoon"...

I almost disagreed with you, Esri, on the villain being completely selfish. I was thinking of "3:10 to Yuma". But then I realized the soft spots in the villain's character were all about selfishness. He'd kill to protect his weaknesses, and protect to do the same. In the end, of course, his supposed sacrifice was pretty meaningless, considering it was the hero who got killed, and the villain escaped on the very train that was to take him to prison. That's REAL selfishness!

At 1:57 AM, Blogger Gillian Layne said...

Good grief, how could I forget Quigley? You're right. And was he a villain in the Die Hard movie as well?

Snape is our favorite character in the HP series, so no villainy there! Just perfect casting. But Voldermort is a perfect villain.


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